Shouts From The Stands: The Feel of the 50M Breaststroke

by SwimSwam Contributors 3

January 25th, 2019 Lifestyle

SwimSwam welcomes reader submissions about all topics aquatic, and if it’s well-written and well-thought, we might just post it under our “Shouts from the Stands” series. We don’t necessarily endorse the content of the Shouts from the Stands posts, and the opinions remain those of their authors. If you have thoughts to share, please send [email protected].

This “Shouts from the Stands” submission comes from Elyse Giaimo, a writer and swimmer in New York City.

I sprung from the popcorn rough cement of the starting block. My head broke through the slow viscous shock of the cold pool. My arms pulled it back and down.

The startle of the start gun still popped in my ears. In my mind’s stereo, Jon Bon Jovi’s “It’s My Life” tuned up to play in a singular loop. Coach Kim’s voice warned, “if you look over, you’ll lose time!”

I wanted to crane my neck but couldn’t afford the milliseconds. I knew she was faster than me. Instead, I felt for the force of the better swimmer’s wake. Was it dragging me forward? Was I pushing against it? It was steady. The ripping velocity was right by my side.

As my head turtled out of the shell of the water, I heard whistling and shouting. Loud. The cacophony was an IV trigger pushing a line of adrenaline into my veins.

My auditory senses bobbed back into a silent density. A frothy gurgle muted the cheers.

I struggled to push against the slippery thick. My legs frogged outward and snapped back in.

I reached the turn and touched the wall with force. Coach Kim shouted the steps, “shove your brother, call your mother!” Commanded, my arms led my body through a pivot. My legs bent to push, hard.

Gliding out of the turn, I waited for the water to slow me, then I moved it away.

Ears and eyes rose up again. The black line on the lane’s cement bottom fell out of focus, then back into clarity. My goggles fogged.

Was my opponent still next to me? Did I lose her at the turn?

I willed myself forward. Up and down. Changing noise was in sync with every switch between air and fluid. Wild sound, less sound.

A tight blink of my eyes warned off the cloying persuasions of fatigue.

The spectators’ heads completed a synchronized turn. I slammed into the end with the open palms of both hands.

The stopwatch quit counting speed. The timer lowered his arm. The race was over. My breathing was no longer measured gulps. I panted in exhaustion as I unclenched the wall with one hand, and my body dropped to the left. Finally, I could look without losing time.

I saw her. She was just touching the wall. I’d won.

About Elyse Giaimo

Elyse Giaimo is a Grant Writer at a large social service agency in New York City. As a new member of The Montclair Write Group, she has begun to experiment a bit with writing for fun. In addition to writing and swimming, Elyse loves baking and playing make-believe with her three year old daughter.

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cynthia curran
4 years ago

It hurts, I just did a 50 yard breaststroke at 61 years old. Not as fun as when I did relays in high school or community college that were 50 yards. Actually, it didn’t hurt much less than the 50 yard fly I did at 61 years old also at a senior Olympics.

4 years ago

Enjoyed it.

4 years ago

WOW! Powerfully written! A unique look in to the mind of a swimmer – I can totally relate! Loved this piece